Paragraf Bahasa Inggris 2

¹The speaker says that no many animals can capture the attentions of both young or old people like a dinosaur. ²One of the most well-known dinosaurs is the animal we used to call as the “brontosaur.” ³Everyone familiar with this dinosaur. ⁴It has appearing in museums, movies, advertisements, even in cartons such like The Flintstones. ⁵But in recently, this animal has other name. ⁶It is now called as the brontosaur.” ⁷The author of the article that we read is not agree with this concept. ⁸He says is not scientific or fair to name this creature as a brontosaur. ⁹In 1877 a scientist who’s name was Marsh found the bones of a dinosaur and he named it as apatosaurus. ¹⁰In 1879 another scientist who’s name was Cope found the bones of a dinosaur. ¹¹He has believed it was a difference species and called it a brontosaur but later was learned that these two animals were same. ¹²A international commission for naming animals has rules that say the name given for the first animal to discover is name that should use. ¹³Therefore the name apatosaurus is really correct.

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Kalimat 1: The speaker says that no many animals can capture the attentions of both young or old people like a dinosaur.

Masalah:

both young or old people seharusnya both young and old people (yang benar both … and … dan bukan both … or …)

Kalimat 2: One of the most well-known dinosaurs is the animal we used to call as the “brontosaur.”

Masalah: nil (nihil)

Kalimat 3: Everyone familiar with this dinosaur.

Masalah:

Everyone familiar with seharusnya Everyone is familiar with (supaya menjadi kalimat harus ada to be)

Kalimat 4: It has appearing in museums, movies, advertisements, even in cartons such like The Flintstones. 

Masalah:

It has appearing seharusnya It has appeared (diperlukan verb-3)

such like The Flintstones seharusnya  such as The Flintstones (salah milih pasangan kata: “such as” bukan “such like”)

Kalimat 5: But in recently, this animal has other name.

Masalah:

But in recently seharusnya But recently (kelebihan kata “in”)

Kalimat 6: It is now called as the brontosaur.”

Masalah: nil (nihil)

Kalimat 7: The author of the article that we read is not agree with this concept.

Masalah:

that we read is not agree with this concept seharusnya that we have read does not agree with  (present perpect harus hadir dan salah pemakaian kata bantu)

Kalimat 8: He says is not scientific or fair to name this creature as a brontosaur.

Masalah:

He says is not scientific seharusnya He says it is not scientific (penghilangan subyek)

Kalimat 9: In 1877 a scientist who’s name was Marsh found the bones of a dinosaur and he named it as apatosaurus

Masalah:

who’s name seharusnya whose name (salah pemakaian kata “whose” atau “who’s”)

Kalimat 10: In 1879 another scientist who’s name was Cope found the bones of a dinosaur.

Masalah:

who’s name seharusnya whose name (salah pemakaian kata “whose” atau “who’s”)

Kalimat 11: He has believed it was a difference species and called it a brontosaur but later was learned that these two animals were same.

Masalah:

a difference species seharusnya a different species (yang diperlukan adjektiva untuk menerangkan species, untuk “species” antara bentuk tunggal dan jamak sama)

but later was learned seharusnya but later it was learned (penghilangan subyek)

these two animals were same seharusnya these two animals were the same (adjektiva yang mewakili nomina)

Kalimat 12: A international commission for naming animals has rules that say the name given for the first animal to discover is name that should use.

Masalah:

A international commission seharusnya An International Commission (pilihan artikel salah dan nama lembaga diawali huruf besar)

is name that should use seharusnya is name that should be used (diperlukan bentuk pasif)

Kalimat 13: Therefore the name apatosaurus is really correct.

Masalah:

Therefore the name apatosaurus is really correct seharusnya Therefore, the name apatosaurus is really correct (kurang koma)

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